This is an HTML version of an attachment to the Official Information request 'Copies of submissions on draft Open Government National Action Plan 4'.


10 February 2023 
New Zealand Council for Civil Liberties 
[FYI request #21465 email] 
Dear New Zealand Council for Civil Liberties 
Official Information Request 
Our Ref:  OIA 2022-0202 
I refer to your official information request received on 20 December 2022 where you asked: 
“The Commission recently ran a public consultation between 24 November 2022 and 12 
December 2022 on the draft of New Zealand's 4th National Action Plan as a member of the 
Open Government Partnership. 
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Please provide the following information: 
1) a copy of all the submissions received on the draft 4th National Action Plan. 
2) The Commission's analysis of al  the submissions (not simply the summary published here:
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3) The Commission's advice to the Minister for the Public Service on the submissions and
amendments to the draft National Action Plan. 
4) Al  briefings, advice, aides memoire, reports or other written information provided to the

Minister for the Public Service on matters relating to the draft 4th National Action Plan in the
months September, October, November, and December 2022. 
Under section 16 of the OIA, our preference is to receive the information in a text searchable 
format (not image-only PDF), as attachments to an email sent to the address from which the 

Commission received this request. 
Level 10, RBNZ Building   |   2 The Terrace   |   PO Box 329 
Wel ington 6140   |   New Zealand 
Phone +64 4 495 6600 

Under section 19(a)(i ) of the OIA, if the Commission decides to withhold any information, 
please provide us with the grounds in support of the withholding reason cited in the decision, 
along with details of the public interest factors favouring disclosure that were considered by 

the Commission when making its decision on the request.” 
On 3 February 2023 we notified you of an extension of the time to make our decision to 22 February 
2023. 
Information being released 
Please find enclosed and outlined in the below table submissions that were received on the draft 
Fourth National Action Plan.  
Item 
Document Description 
Decision 

Submissions received on the draft fourth National Action Plan 
Released in part 
Please find outlined in the below table, the Commission's advice to the Minister for the Public Service 
in regard to the draft Fourth National Action Plan.    
New Zealand’s Fourth Open Government Partnership National Action Plan Cabinet Paper along with 
the Action plan 2023-2024 can be found publicly available on the Commission’s website at the 
following link: https://www.publicservice.govt.nz/assets/DirectoryFile/New-Zealands-Fourth-Open-
Government-Partnership-National-Action-Plan-combined-papers.pdf 
Item 
Date 
Document Description 
Decision 

23 September 2022  Aide Memoire: Update on National Action Plan 4  Released in full 
(NAP 4) Commitments 

Attachment: table of consolidated Civil Society  Released in full 
Organisations 
suggested feedback and 
TKM/Agency response 

3 October 2022 
Aide Memoire: Meeting with Civil Society  Released in full 
Organisations about the OGP National Action 
Plan (NAP4) Commitments 

Attachment:  table of consolidated Civil Society  Released in full 
Organisations suggested feedback and 
TKM/Agency response 

Attachment: Civil Society Organisations Bio’s 
Released in full 

14 October 2022 
Report: draft Cabinet paper and Open Released in part 
Government Partnership  National Action Plan 
for consultation 

Attachment: draft Cabinet Paper: New Zealand’s  Publicly available 
Fourth Open Government Partnership National 
Action Plan 

Attachment  –  Appendix A Open Government  Publicly available 
Partnership Draft New Zealand’s Fourth National 
Action Plan 2023-2024 


10 
Attachment 
– 
Appendix B 
potential  Publicly available 
commitments for consideration 
11 
14 November 2022 
Aide Memoire: GOV meeting on the Fourth Open  Released in full 
Government Partnership National Action Plan 
(NAP4) 
12 
Attachment  –  Appendix 1: Talking points the  Released in full 
Fourth  Open Government Partnership National 
Action Plan (NAP4) Cabinet Paper 
13 
22 November 2022 
Aide Memoire: Open Government Partnership  Released in full 
(OGP) Fourth National Action Plan (NAP4) – 
response to concerns raised by civil society 
organisations 
14 
29 November 2022 
Responses to media questions 
Released in part 
15 
13 December 2022 
Aide Memoire: Approval of the Fourth Open  Released in full 
Government Partnership National Action Plan 
(the plan) 
16 
Attachment – Appendix A 
Released in full 
17 
Attachment  –  Appendix B Summary of key  Released in full 
feedback received on NAP4 
I have decided to release the documents outlined in the tables above subject to some information 
being withheld under section 9(2)(a) of the Official Information Act 1982 (OIA) to protect the privacy 
of natural persons, including that of deceased natural persons.  In making my decision, I have 
considered the public interest considerations in section 9(1) of the OIA. 
If you wish to discuss this decision with us, please feel free to contact 
[email address]. 
You have the right to seek an investigation and review by the Ombudsman of this decision. 
Information about how to make a complaint is available at www.ombudsman.parliament.nz  or 
freephone 0800 802 602. 
Please note that we intend to publish this letter (with your personal details removed) and enclosed 
documents on the Te Kawa Mataaho Public Service Commission’s website. 
Yours sincerely 
Nicky Dirks 
Manager – Ministerial and Executive Services 
Te Kawa Mataaho Public Service Commission 

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