From:
Gerard Hoffman
To:
Georgia Tawharu
Subject:
FW: On being a halls student at university
Date:
Wednesday, 12 December 2018 2:34:00 PM
Attachments:
On being a halls student at university KE.docx
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From: Katherine Edmond
Sent: Wednesday, 3 October 2018 7:38 a.m.
To: Gerard Hoffman <[email address]>; '[email address]'
<[email address]>
Cc: Sarah Boyd <[email address]>
Subject: On being a halls student at university
Hi Gerard and Annette,
The piece is excellent, thank you so much.
I have done a light edit to get the word down a little (it’s now at 648) – just trying to reduce the
opportunity for the media outlet to do the editing.
I haven’t changed the sense of anything.
Annette, how would you like to be described after your name?
Thank you again.
Regards
Katherine
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From: Annette Beautrais <[email address]>
Date: 2 October 2018 at 8:15:44 PM NZDT
To: Gerard Hoffman <[email address]>
Subject: Re: On being a halls student at university Oct 2 2018 draft of a
stuff article
Hi Gerard
I think what you have written is good. I 've abbreviated it - to 680 words -
hope they'll accept that. See what you think - attached.
The word limit is very restrictive given all the bases we want to cover.
Sincerely
Annette L. Beautrais PhD
[email address]
03 687 2192 or
On Tue, Oct 2, 2018 at 5:51 PM Gerard Hoffman
<[email address]> wrote:
Kia ora Annette
Our comms team have had an agreement that we can publish an opinion
piece under both of our names on the Stuff Website (approx 600 words) but
we need to get it to them by early tomorrow afternoon. It would be
published on Thursday .
I have had a go at putting some ideas on paper. Its a bit rough and I am sure
you will have lots .
It is also too long by far .
Thoughts?
Gerard
